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...the scanner isn't working....I had to take a crappy picture of it and attempt to salvage the damage in iPhoto >_> I didn't do a very good job. ;_; I totally spent 10 hours on this pic and I really want to post it! Its not even as big as its supposed to be...

FAIL.

Anyway, bitching aside, I shouldn't have been working on this when I have a million other things to do...but It's UlquiHime!!! So it had to be done. So I don't spoil the recent chapters to anyone who is still reading Bleach and has been living in a cave for the last few weeks, lets just say that I'm a little pissed at Kubo right now.

I finished this picture in Barnes and Noble earlier tonight. Yay spending all the money I made at Detour >.<;

Critiques


:iconundergroundracer57:
This is really pretty! I really like the colors a lot. Inoue's hair looks really beautiful, and I love the way you draw eyes. I want Ulquiorra's sweater...

Anyway, here I go. Inoue's eyes are too far apart. Typically, a pair of eyes are no farther than an eye's width apart. Also, take a look at the space between her right ear and eye; they're too close. Try paying attention to the distance between eyes and ears next time you look at people.

Another thing I've spotted is that her face is a little too long. I get the feeling that the space between the bottom of her nose and her chin are longer than they should be.

Her neck seems to be a bit too wide at the base, and I think her shoulders are a little too narrow.

I almost wish that you had used a ruler or some sort of straightedge to help you with the orange lines in the background. If you don't look at it in full view and if you notice details, you'll see what I'm talking about.

I hope that this has helped you out. I critiqued this not as your friend, but as a fellow artist.
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:iconvictortky:
Very nice poses and faces. I love the clothing and the colours. It gives off an emotional feeling.

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:iconstrawberry-demyx:
awesome loverlyness > w <

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:iconvrennavrien:
YAY for hoodie wearing Ulqui!

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:iconhino-san:
lol sweet~ when i read the chapter i was like, "whaa~" yeah. Nice coloring job as always~

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:iconjujubeeze:
Wow, this is neat! love the flow of the hair! :+fav:

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:iconbigkitty-chan:
Thank you so much~! I really wanted to draw something fun and kind of "bleach" styled with the background. Thank you again!

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:iconbigkitty-chan:
:heart: thank you!

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:iconbigkitty-chan:
Hahah, you so know he would wear a hoodie if he were in the real world XD

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:iconbigkitty-chan:
I know!!! ;_; Say it ain't so!

Xd thank you so much!

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Apr 23, 2008, 8:00:06 AM

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