The mistake would have happened anyway, because of the uneven numbers. haha I don't know if that's what you were talking about...

Anyway, you're getting good with the fluid colors! :] I like how I can't really see the strokes in the background. They're all going in the same direction, so it looks like they're fading, you know? Also, the blending on her dress is really nice. I'd like to see you try blending the white highlights in sometime, though. I'm curious to see how that would look with your style.

I like the way you drew the locks of her hair with rectilinear angles. It looks really cool, and the highlighting adds to it as well. Her hands are a little small, but that's okay, it isn't the main focus and it isn't as noticeable.

I adore that halo. Oh man. The lines are so beautiful [i think it's because they're all different], and I really like the swirleys on the outside of it too. It's all... mystical. *dork*

The vines are really pretty too; I like their shape. I think that the green could have been a bit darker in color, or at least they could have a wider variety of values. Even though they have white highlights, they seem very flat to me. I know that they should be somewhat round in their shape, so it's odd/hard for me to look at them without being somewhat... confused? Crap, I lied. There's shading, but yeah. You could probably use a somewhat darker green marker to help with the shading. It's hard to figure out it's there without actually looking pretty close at it.

Awesome work Meagan! :] :] :]